Todays editing tip from my editor

One thing to note is sometimes the narrative becomes a little ‘we went here, then we went there’.

I’d say think about ways you can make the ‘here’ and ‘there’ a little more eventful when it comes to another draft. That way we get not only the whats and the wheres but the all-important why, too.

Jordan

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Fictional author, blogs and researches family trees. I write about historical families by focusing on the challenges, social issues and indiscretions that caused major disruptions in their lives. My aim is to create realistic reality to the lives our ancestors lived, bringing greater understanding to our generation. Follow The Fortune Seekers novels- Dan and Charlotte and Power and Authority. Books 3 and 4 underway. I also write as Annie Browne.

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