Todays editing tip from my editor

One thing to note is sometimes the narrative becomes a little ‘we went here, then we went there’.

I’d say think about ways you can make the ‘here’ and ‘there’ a little more eventful when it comes to another draft. That way we get not only the whats and the wheres but the all-important why, too.

Jordan

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